Saturday, June 9, 2012

The End of You Missing Me



I don't think that anything
Will ever hurt me as bad
As the end of you missing me
It's like I'd never really lost you
Until the moment of realization
That I never cross your mind
Anymore
And I prayed every night for a year
"Please don't let him him forget me"
But you forgot me
And sometimes I feel
If I don't exist in your thoughts
Then I don't exist at all
I used to be
Your first call
And I can't get that back
No I doubt I'll never recover
From falling out of your mind
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12 comments:

  1. naimishikaJune 25, 2012 at 4:37 PM

    Nice. You could have to refine your writing. I am not saying that you are not doing well. But I seek more improvement.

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  2. amyNovember 29, 2012 at 5:49 PM

    I love your poems, Kara. They are speaking for my inarticulate emotions right now. Thank you.

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  3. raymond maxwellDecember 24, 2012 at 2:44 AM

    Your words are powerful, Kara. They touch the soul with an immediacy that only true poets can comprehend. I look forward to reading more.

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  4. Tony HamidJanuary 5, 2013 at 5:43 AM

    Fantastic,as earlier ones I read were. Like the simple depth you achieve,Kara. Can't criticize, because I like it too much.

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  5. Kara KzJanuary 5, 2013 at 8:27 AM

    Thanks so much! Glad you like them!

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  6. AnonymousMarch 1, 2013 at 12:08 AM

    Heart-breaking and honest; this would be a great piece at a spoken word event. Really good. :)

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  7. UnknownApril 11, 2013 at 9:24 AM

    i love all your words,want to read more and more your poems !you're a amazing writer !

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  8. Geraldina MendezApril 11, 2013 at 5:41 PM

    Loved it. A terrible moment is that, indeed. The moment we think of each other is the definition of "present"

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  9. linhelenMay 8, 2013 at 5:56 PM

    Hi...Speaking from experience as someone who has lived a long time...People actually do die without you in their memory. I am reasonably positive about this. :-)More important for you is who you keep in memory.

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  10. UnknownMay 8, 2013 at 6:16 PM

    Hi Kara,
    It almost looks like you are speaking my real life account through your words. Poignant, succinct and brutally honest.
    Thank you for sharing it.
    Aparna

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